PART ONE (1)
It kept me awake during the night
During the day, it was all I held in sight
I didn’t know the words to explain what I felt
But I knew it was hot enough to make my innards melt
It was right there when I crossed the border
But I thought to myself, why bother?
It seemed to be telling me I was not wanted
I simply took all warnings for granted
Moving on it begun to gnaw at me
Causing me to look deep within me
I was looking for the root of my guilt
Trying to find what had been spilt
I was unsuccessful
I became totally resentful
Why is my mind doing this to me?
I started to get mad at me
Finding a solution was the right way to go
But something kept saying no
I needed a remedy
So I tried to think sensibly.
End of part one…
Beautiful. I love it. Can’t wait for part 2.
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Cool
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Nice Poem and very insightful
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it’s a very beautiful poem I love it
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Wow. AWESOME lines.failure can be such a headache.hope i got it right.
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You did.
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Thank you
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Beautiful!
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Thank you. I appreciate it
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Great one there. Congrats
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Thank you
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Beautiful Essay Essy…
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Thank you
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Great stuff.
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Thank you so much
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Beautiful poem
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Thank you
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Pretty cool piece there👍😉, sounds like an untold love tale/moment of distress – hihi like Alice in the wonderland.
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